Win the bid.
Then make the spot.

A pitch the agency can sell, a shot list the crew can run. One canvas from boards to wrap.

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Agency script

father + daughter, the long way to the trailhead. the truck and the tires carry it. almost no dialogue.

References

reichardt patience. gas-station light at 5am. dust on the dashboard. golden hour on the last ridge.

The take

not a car ad. a film about the last summer before she leaves. earn the product by never selling it.

✦ Director's Treatment

The Long Way

A father and his daughter take the long way to the trailhead one last time before she leaves, and the drive says everything they don’t.

The take

Not a car ad. A film about a father running out of mornings, that a truck happens to carry.

Look

Anamorphic, long lenses, available light. Warm, lived-in, handheld in the cab.

Three steps. Then you are ready to shoot.

Build the pitch

Drop the script, references, and the director's vision on the canvas, then wire it into a Treatment node. Shotwright drafts a document the agency can hand the client.

The Long Way — Carrow :60

ref_01Gas station, 5am

ref_02The last ridge, gold

The take

Earn the product by never selling it.

Dialogue

Almost none. The drive does the talking.

✦ Treatment

Lock the boards

Sketch frames or pull from the Motions library. Panels link back to the script lines they cover, and approval comments thread per frame.

AgencyToday

Love 2B as the end frame. Hold it longer.

Run the day

Wire the boards into a shot list. The producer prints the run-of-day; the camera team carries the lens notes.

Shot list4 must-get · 11 total

WS ×3CU ×5INSERT ×3

01CU

INT. Cab — her hand on the wheel

The whole spot in one insert. Steal it on the move.

02WS

EXT. The avenue, 5am — truck low

Long lens, empty street. Headlights only.

03WS

EXT. The last ridge — gold breaks

The earned shot. Shoot it at the right ten minutes.

A pitch, boards, and a shot list the team trusts.

Client revisions land in one place. Director, producer, and agency all read the same canvas. Nothing falls between two tools.

Director's Treatment

The Long Way

A father and his daughter take the long way to the trailhead one last time before she leaves, and the drive says everything they don’t.

Why me

I grew up in the passenger seat of a truck like this one. My father didn’t talk much, but he drove the long way when something was ending, and I learned to read him by the road he chose. I want to make that feeling, not describe it.

So I read this brief as a film, not a spot. The product is real and it’s in every frame, carrying two people who are running out of mornings together. I’d rather you feel the tires than see them.

The film

It’s still dark. A father waits in the cab outside a gas station while his daughter, eighteen and already half-gone, climbs in with two coffees. They take the long way, the back road he always takes, and neither of them says why.

The drive is the film. Dust in the dashboard light. Her boots on the seat. A song he turns down so he can say something, then doesn’t. The road climbs. The cold blue gives way, four seconds of gold breaks over the last ridge, and for a moment the leaving isn’t happening yet.

We end at the trailhead. She’s out before he’s in park. He watches her go, then looks at the empty seat. We never cut to a logo. The last thing we feel is the road that held them, which is the only place the product needed to be.

The take

Not a car ad. A film about a father running out of mornings with his kid, that a set of tires happens to carry. I earn the product by never selling it.

Camera

Anamorphic, 2.39:1. Long lenses on the road, a 32mm handheld in the cab.

Light

Available light. The fluorescents, the dawn, one bounce. No condor.

Color

Warm and faded. The grade of a photograph left in a glovebox.

Music

One guitar, sparse. No needle-drop. The truck and the road do the rest.

Visual references